Post by Mizuni on Apr 29, 2013 14:20:10 GMT -5
Written By: Lalin
Status: complete
Genre: Fanfiction | Fanfom | Warriors | OC
Disclaimer: Warriors (c) Erin Hunter. Original characters, settings, and plots, (c) Mizuni (Lalin)
Comments: currently book one of three
BrackenClan
Book One: The Promise
chapter one preview
Book One: The Promise
chapter one preview
Bumblepaw padded on torn paws. He struggled to leap from a boulder to the one closer to the ground. Any cat could look at the mountains and say that they would be hard to cross, like Bumblepaw had once thought, but no cat could understand the journey it was to get through itthem?. The dark pelted tabby tomcat had left his Clan about a quarter moon ago. His sister, Dippedpaw, had stayed behind with their mother Aspentail. Bumblepaw and his sister lost their father not long ago and left the nursery afterward. Bumblepaw had felt left out of Clan life after that. Then, one night, he was given a dream by StarClan. His father had come to him and had told him that he must leave his Clan. Bumblepaw wasn’t sure about it at first, but soon found that this was what he had to do. When he woke he said goodbye to his sister and left before another cat could notice him. He had spent a week traveling through the chain of mountains that bordered the valley where his Clan, and another known as ReedClan, lived.
Bumblepaw slipped suddenly, and his thoughts of MizuClan slipped with him as he let out a terrified yowl. He hit the moor ground hard although he could feel how springy and cool it felt to his flaming paws.
The young apprentice got up slowly and shook his pelt. How much farther did he have to go? Yet, if Bumblepaw were to lead a Clan, he would want it to be as far away from the valley as he could get. With Twoface and his “family” about, Bumblepaw didn’t want to risk the safety of himself or the cats that would soon be joining him. However, the journey was far from over and Bumblepaw wasn’t sure if he was going to be able to make it.
What if I can’t find the new land, and fail my father? What if Twoface finds me or the Clan that I will make? Does StarClan have the right cat?
Questions swirled in Bumblepaw’s head, but none could be answered right now. The tomcat shook his head to clear his thoughts and moved on.